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Thoughts of mine during the Sunset



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Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:38 am
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Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: ...Aet and Bog sometimes sound like a comedy duo.

Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: Just pointing it out.

The neap tide draws.
The Kellerok nears.
Caterjunes.





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Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:04 pm
Critiq says...



Wow, thats depressing. Definitely not a story-quality post but it's interesting all the same. So depressing though. I'd say something else but it'd just be a synonym for depressed. So ta-ta.
Spoiler! :
I like people thinking that I have something so scandalous to say that I put it in spoiler tags, and I'm sorry that because of this selfish desire you were roped into reading this for not real lasting value.





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Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:10 am
Minniax says...



Wow I liked that. It's simple, yet deep and a lot of people can relate. Including me.
Does this describe your life? Or someone you know?
Currently reading: The Dead Zone by Stephen King





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Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:57 am
deleted15 says...



Minniax wrote:Wow I liked that. It's simple, yet deep and a lot of people can relate. Including me.
Does this describe your life? Or someone you know?



Hey, yeah thats my life at the moment haha.

I'm a metal guitarist and have nobody to get together and play it with. I'm stuck in this small town for another year at least. When I move I'll be in a bigger town with more friends and it will be great, but for now it isn't too pleasant.
Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: ...Aet and Bog sometimes sound like a comedy duo.

Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: Just pointing it out.

The neap tide draws.
The Kellerok nears.
Caterjunes.





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Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:46 am
Lia says...



Where did my high-school days go?


I get this so well! I get everything well! You're not the only one stuck in a small place!
*sibling of pain hug*
It hit the spot!





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Fri Dec 07, 2012 8:06 am
CharlesCrawley says...



This is great! I like it! It has really deep emotions!





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Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:15 am
nomadpenguin says...



Metal guitarist and no one to play with? Try being a classical guitarist.
I’m being ironic. Don't interrupt a man in the midst of being ironic, it’s not polite.





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Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:22 am
deleted15 says...



This post was made a good 3 years ago, things have changed. =P
Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: ...Aet and Bog sometimes sound like a comedy duo.

Dec 18 2012, 7:43 PM
AmelieoftheValley: Just pointing it out.

The neap tide draws.
The Kellerok nears.
Caterjunes.








Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand