Well, it's hard to tell if you don't give us specifics. What exactly is it you want us to be editing?
Also, if it's your stories you DO want us to edit, then I'd advise against it. Editing is all part of the learning process, and will improve spelling, grammar, as well as where you're going wrong/what you're doing right with the story.
There's always been a lot of tension between Lois and me, and it's not so much that I want to kill her, it's just, I want her to not be alive anymore.
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