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Tue Jan 29, 2013 8:23 pm
AndrewJamesMurray says...



Hi there! My name is Andrew Murray; I've put my middle name in my handle because of that morose Scotsman who plays tennis and who is stealing all the glory of my name!

Anyway, just stopping in to say hello and I would appreciate it if you could take the time to read my first poem on YWC: "An Ode to Byron".

Thanks,

Andrew
"Wielder of the stateliest measure / ever moulded by the lips of man." - Tennyson
  





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Tue Jan 29, 2013 8:35 pm
Trident says...



Welcome! I had a chance to look at your poem and it was lovely. Let me know if I can assist more specifically.

As for the Andy Murray thing, I only realized it when you omitted your middle name, so you achieved the correct result I suppose. But he's not the worst person to emulate. Now we just need a Novak Djokovic, and someone with resulting Serbian middle complementing it.
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