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Hey, i'm Mandy



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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:25 pm
Angel17 says...



My name is Mandy
I'm 14 years old, my birthday is nov 17th, which happens to be the same day i have to do exams!
I live in London, but most of my family live in India. I love writng, reading and love music.
I also luv singing but it would help if i was in tune!

WELL IF ANYONE WANTS, I'VE WRITTEN 2 POEMS. i'd like to hear any advice for improvements.
Real poetry are those with the best words in the best order

~~~~~~~~Mandy~~~~~~~~~
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:34 pm
Nox says...



Hiya Mandy,

I also live in London and my brother recently came back from India. He loved it.

I don't usually review poems because I'm hopeless at them and it would be unfair if I said another person poem wasn't good.

I hope your enjoying your stay at YWS. :D
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There is never enough time
To show what is in our heart.
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:47 pm
Armadian says...



Welcome Welcome....Need any help you can pm me.
How can you prove that we exist? Maybe we don't exist...
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:51 pm
Nefer says...



Hey Mandy,

I think I reviewed one of your poems already. :D
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:55 pm
Angel17 says...



Yeah you did. And i used your advice. Thankyou :D
Real poetry are those with the best words in the best order

~~~~~~~~Mandy~~~~~~~~~
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:58 pm
Nefer says...



You're welcome. I'll read your other poem later.
  





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Fri Oct 07, 2005 3:10 pm
Emma says...



Nice to meet. You please remember to flush the toilet every time you finish your 'business' :D

Thank you, come again!
  








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