This is a really good piece -- I can't complain in any way: No typos, no spelling mistakes... It is all so sad. I loved the mood, the way you made readers care about the characters, the style in which you wrote and everything! The end was an absolute knockout blow -- this is a fantastic piece of writing in every way. Great work!
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When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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