This is a really good piece -- I can't complain in any way: No typos, no spelling mistakes... It is all so sad. I loved the mood, the way you made readers care about the characters, the style in which you wrote and everything! The end was an absolute knockout blow -- this is a fantastic piece of writing in every way. Great work!
"Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts" - Einstein
You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go... — Dr. Seuss
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