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Shorebird I took



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Tue Jul 09, 2013 10:55 pm
BeautifulLetdown says...



Okay... I don't know what I'm doing so if this ends up wrong I'm sorry don't kill me. So, this picture [that I hope you see] I took while on a stroll at the beach. Like or dislike? Any tips? If you read this I love you.
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Fri Jul 12, 2013 8:42 pm
Stori says...



A very nice photo, if a non-photographer might say so. I wouldn't change a thing about it.
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien