Young Writers Society

This is just one of my drawings I made,hope you all like it
Also the first time I've ever been here so haha
I am Moka,Pleased to meet all of you

Moka!

That's beautiful~ Love the yes! o:

Hey! Aqua here!

Moka, I love this drawing. XD It's a bit blurry, but still... awesome as always, my friend. I will always be one step behind you!

You're really talanted, Moka. Although the pic's blurred I can still catch the glimpses of spookiness in it. Especially the eyes. They're totally cute+creepy. (if that makes sense) And the hair shine's pretty neat. It looks like a doll coming back to life. Just awesome. And do make yourself welcome to this cozy place of ours. I'm looking forward to more drawings from you.

Thank you everyone! this means a lot to me

Hey Moka! This is a really beautiful picture, I like it a lot I was drawn right to her eyes and doll-like face. The black and white gives this a bit of a mystical, mysterious look to it which I like.

There were a few things that were confusing to me, like the backwards letters at the bottom and the black ribbon going under her hand. I couldn't figure out why they were there or what they meant.

I think you did a really good job drawing her hand! Hands are super difficult to draw and you tackled it nicely.

Her face was my favorite because it looks like she is looking right at us and drawing us into the picture. Technically, her eyes might be a tad large, even for manga style, but that's not too big of an issue. I'm also a fan of the wavy design to her hair.

Overall, some advice I'd give you is to work on defining the shapes a little more, because the drawing is a bit foggy and most of the details get lost.

Hope this was helpful! Keep drawing ^_^