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Hey guys, these are just some old pictures I found going through my old works on this site. You may have seen them before, you may not have. If you remember who posted them, well then, I'm busted. These were my favorites. Anyways, here they are:


Just a simple one of my cat. Edited to Sepia.


Probably my favorite. How this came out so good, I don't know.


Just one cool one I took at an aquarium.



I was told before the fish one could use some color pop, so I gave it a little.


Hope you guys enjoyed these, give me some feedback. Thanks,

Fruit

already seen them, already reviewed ^_^

Hey, Fermenting! Here to review.

So! Photo one:

I really liked the cat's expression here - the contemplative cat! It's lovely and the cat looks furry and so cute and adorable. I like the sepia you added - it adds to the mood of the photo. To improve here, I'd think about the background: it's a bit bland and it's not of anything in particular. Just some blinds and window shutters and it doesn't add to the photo and makes it seem more like it's just the average cool shot that you took rather than something more special which is a shame because the cat's in a great pose. Perhaps if you set it to the portrait setting, the background would become blurrier as currently the background doesn't serve a purpose or add anything - rather, the cat is the main focus here

As for the next shot - I love the silhouette! Does he/she do poses like these all the time? How do you make it do that? I think it's a great shot and I lovelovelove the silhouette. However, the background: what is it? Here, the background would provide some context to the photo as right now, I don't know what's going on apart from the lovely silhouette of the cat.

Final shot! Yes, I totally agree about bringing out those colours. The colours are so much more vibrant. It's an interesting photo and I like it. I think it'd be improved if there was a nice vignette around the fish to really bring attention to the centre of the image.

Hope I helped and feel free to PM me if you have any questions about this review! Keep snappin',

Blues.

Thanks for the review Blues! Just some quick responses for the second one. For the second one, my cat was in the same window as the first picture lol. When I put these up the last time, I was told the background took away, so I took it out lol. There were a lot of good things you said, things I didn't notice, it was a great review.

Fruit

Haha, oh really? That's interesting, lol. Yay for agreeing to disagree?

Speaking of silhouettes, there are a few photographers who do that kind of thing: Jasper James comes to mind... possibly Dan Mountford.

Your cat should be a model, lol.