3 versions, the first is 100% digitally drawn, the second is what happens when I edit it and add a pic for the background. the last is just randomness.
let me know which pic is your fav!
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Ahhhh, you get better and better every time I see your work! The second one is by far my favorite, though I like them all.
Now, I do have a few nitpicks.
The face and the hair are both stellar, as usual, but from the neck down she looks a little off.
The neck: It looks almost hourglass-shaped. On the left side (her right) it looks nicely curved. But on her left side, it shouldn't widen like that as it reaches her jawline.
Shoulders: Slender women do tend to have more downward-sloping shoulders, but here they're so low she almost looks like a giraffe (I'm guilty of this too, I admit). They also appear to be quite wide.
Chest: It's a bit awkward, but since she is a shirtless female, there should be at least a suggestion of where her breasts start, even if they're not on the page. Even men tend to have some sort of variance in the geography of their chests; as it is, it's rather difficult to tell that it's her chest.
Overall, though, these are amazing! You have some definite talent, and your coloring and shading skills are just fantastic. If I had a better printer, I'd be tempted to print off one of these for myself.
Keep up the great work!
(P.S. I haven't drawn anything in months, but these have inspired me to go outside and try my hand at it.)
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What did I say. I told you I’d get to more of yours, and here I am. Another really great one from you sheep, you never fail to disappoint. Alright, so onto the review.
There were a couple of things about this one that I didn’t really find that great. First was the lack of the background (If you cant tell, I’m reviewing the first one right now lol). I think the fact that there’s no background takes away from the pic a bit, although you fix that problem with the others. The second thing with this that irked me a little bit was the lack of clothes. I think it’d add a lot to the picture if she had clothes, and if you intended for her not to have clothes, I’d just crop out a little bit of the picture at the bottom. Finally, this is small, but the way you had the hair go to skin (or vice-vera) I didn’t enjoy. There’s not nothing really separating them, not a line or anything, there’s no transition, it just switches. That seems to be it for that.
Onto the other part of reviewing. There was a lot I liked about this piece. I’m going to attempt not to obsess over the hair like I usually do. But it’s kind of hard with you. I don’t know how you do it, but it always seems to turn out great with you. I really liked the transitions of the colors, and just the style and all that great stuff. Now, something I don’t always say: I really liked the eyes. There was just something about them. The colors, the details, but what really did me in was the sparkle. I can see a sparkle in her eyes, it may just be the glare of the sun or something, but I see it as a sparkle, and I really liked it.
Which one was my favorite you ask? Why, the second one. Why you ask? I liked that one best for two reasons. The first one was the background. I really liked the background, and it just added to the picture. Also, I liked how you had the colors got darker, and I just liked it with the colors darker than lighter.
Now, that seems to wrap up that review, until next time,
Fruit.
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