Young Writers Society

Here's a sketch of an archer I made recently. I searched it up on google and liked it immediately so I drew it. Hope you like it.

OMG.

I just totally flipped biscuits when I saw this.

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Look familiar?

I'm just speechless...

I'll come back and review later when I've picked up my jaw.

Alright, I'm back lol.

So this picture is amazing, first of all. It feels like you just sat down and took your time on this. It doesn't look rushed at all. The lines and shading are all so good. This looks like it was so much fun!!

I don't know if it's just me, but your shading style looks a little different than usual here and I like it. It looks like you are using series of quick lines for shading like in the skirt and hair instead of block shades. I think this looks a lot nicer, a lot more free.

The face is very pretty and I love the detail to the outfit.

You probably spent ages on this and everything, but if I'd add some critique I'd say that her hair, towards the ends, gets a little rough. They still look like they are in the sketch phase and that you haven't added the final lines and definition yet.

Soooo gooooood!

...would it be alright if I colored this for you? Digitally?

!O0o!

Holy Damn, this is ten times better then anything I'll be able to do! OuO

I love the shadowing, the pose, and the detail! And the outfit is adorable! X3

Keep up the good work! ^u^

Oh my gosh...

I love this!!!! >u< Can you amaze me even more than you already do, Twinkle?

I just friggin LOVE THIS!!!!!

No comments, no criticism, nothing.

I think it's perfect.

Keep up the good work!! ^-^

Oh! So you are the artist! I though Hanny made it but YOU did!
You.
Are.
Simply.
AmAZinG!
*full stop*

Oh! So you are the artist! I though Hanny made it but YOU did!
You.
Are.
Simply.
AmAZinG!
*full stop*

i total did the whole, "jaw os dropping* moment.
i love the her, everything about her!! her hair, her cloths, her bow*really want one, now!* and her expression. to me her expression was some where in between pain, and scary calulating like she trying to figure out her next play in her chest game. it was kind of haunting looking too. but i fell in love with it!! your really good at drawing, keep at it!!

Wow, so have reviewed already ...But I will review anyways as I have checked this out before on my cellphone but one cannot sign in there so I was waiting for my exams to be over...which yesterday !! Ahem! So let me begin:-

Things that I liked:-

I liked EVERYTHING!!
Lets go step to step from top to bottom...
Firstly, the hair is simply perfect..just the kind everyone would like to have.
Then the hairpiece, it was simply too beautiful.
Her face...she looks pretty cute and her sharp eyes make her look dangerous!. The ears are kinda cut too.
Her hands...They look so graceful! The half fingered gloves match her personality very well...
Her dress...looks very Victorian with a bit of modern touch...lovely!
Her posture...it is perfect! Although the left leg is slanted a bit too much...not much noticeable so don't worry.

Here you go I am done. I don't usually give such long reviews but my mood is good so you got them