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Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:21 pm
ERZA says...



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my drawing-the first drawing i am uploading in yws.
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Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:34 am
Anwesha says...



It's nice. :-)
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely. :-D
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Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:34 am
Anwesha says...



It's nice. :-)
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely. :-D
Imperfection is beauty,
Madness is genius,
And it's better to be absolutely ridiculous
Than to be absolutely boring... :-D




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Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:34 am
Anwesha says...



It's nice. :-)
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely. :-D
Imperfection is beauty,
Madness is genius,
And it's better to be absolutely ridiculous
Than to be absolutely boring... :-D




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Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:34 am
Anwesha says...



It's nice. :-)
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely. :-D
Imperfection is beauty,
Madness is genius,
And it's better to be absolutely ridiculous
Than to be absolutely boring... :-D




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Mon Jan 09, 2012 12:44 am
Dragonette says...



Hi Erza! I definitely love this picture! Good work with making certain things light up, and I LOVE her dress, so pretty! But one thing didn't make sense to me: is she outside or inside? Because it looks like she outside because of the grass and vines and flowers and all, but the moon is coming through the window. So...? Haha but really, I did love. Wish I could draw like you! Keep it up :D
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Mon Jan 09, 2012 1:37 am
xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



I like this a lot :) I think it's awesome how you were able to make all those lighting effects. My favorites parts were the moon shining in, the glowing orbs on the ground, and the dress. I REALLY love the dress design. And you created all those shades of blue. It's really pretty.

I imagine she's either inside a cottage-like house, or inside a tower, do to the vines all over the bricks.

One critique would be that the darker browns on the wall and ground look blotchy. Maybe you were scrubbing too hard with the crayon or something. But that's really the only thing that was distracting.

Keep drawing!!
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