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It's nice.
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely.

It's nice.
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely.

It's nice.
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely.

It's nice.
I like the idea and you've done it with a lot of ardor.
Just one thing, no offence, you draw better.
But, anyway, this one's lovely.

Hi Erza! I definitely love this picture! Good work with making certain things light up, and I LOVE her dress, so pretty! But one thing didn't make sense to me: is she outside or inside? Because it looks like she outside because of the grass and vines and flowers and all, but the moon is coming through the window. So...? Haha but really, I did love. Wish I could draw like you! Keep it up

I like this a lot I think it's awesome how you were able to make all those lighting effects. My favorites parts were the moon shining in, the glowing orbs on the ground, and the dress. I REALLY love the dress design. And you created all those shades of blue. It's really pretty.

I imagine she's either inside a cottage-like house, or inside a tower, do to the vines all over the bricks.

One critique would be that the darker browns on the wall and ground look blotchy. Maybe you were scrubbing too hard with the crayon or something. But that's really the only thing that was distracting.

Keep drawing!!