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Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:14 pm
Sponson Light says...



Yeah thats the picture's name, Scan 003 of November 28th, drawn yesterday the 27th and finished today, I had to go to sleep.
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Tue Nov 29, 2005 7:59 am
Emma says...



It is very good, but I feel as though the shoulders are a little to large. I love how you draw your faces.
  





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Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:40 am
sabradan says...



teach me how to draw people. PLEASE!
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Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:12 am
Shadow Knight says...



Whoa... indredible stuff Sponson. Though her head seems just a little too small compared to her body.
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Tue Nov 29, 2005 11:21 pm
Sponson Light says...



I fixed her up but too lazy to post it.
I didnt scan it either.
I fixed her right shoulder so its barely visible, and fixed her waist/torso a bit so she's thinner.
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Wed Nov 30, 2005 1:16 am
Bobo says...



The other shoulder could use some help, too. The face is like perfect, though. The pose is just kinda unnatural overall. Hm... I should post some more of my pencilwork, methinks.
  





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Wed Nov 30, 2005 1:30 am
Duskglimmer says...



Sponson Light wrote:I fixed her up but too lazy to post it.
I didnt scan it either.
I fixed her right shoulder so its barely visible, and fixed her waist/torso a bit so she's thinner.


laziness = bad

*shushes person behind her that is saying "you're one to talk"*

In other words, I'd love to see the fixed version (the shoulders are really bothering me)

I love the face and hair however.
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Wed Nov 30, 2005 1:48 am
electricbluemonkey says...



That looks...strange. I dont know why. It could be the pose or the size of the shoulders or head that makes me not like this as much as your other work.
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Wed Nov 30, 2005 10:35 am
Nis says...



I like this alot but her trousers look wrong.
  





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Sun Dec 04, 2005 7:49 pm
zelithon says...



Great!
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:15 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



thats awsome
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