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Fri Aug 26, 2005 9:34 pm
Harley says...



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my doggy sketch! he's a stuffed animal on my bed, that my friend gave me for my birthday last year, and he's just so cute! we're doingstill life, and shading and toning in art, so i was practicising in me room, and this is the result! i like him, i think he looks sweet. what about y'all?

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this is a converse shoe i drew; again for practise and i was happy with it. this is the oldest pair of converse shoes i have, hence the creases.

Sorry about the quality, blame it on my non-existant scanner.
  





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Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:18 pm
Bobo says...



Very nice! Good shapes and such; I can easily picture what these things are. You still have a bit of work on shading. You have to remember that contrast is very important, as having a greater range of shades makes it pop more. Also, make sure to smooth the shading as much as possible.

That's all I have to say, so... good art and keep on sketching!
  





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Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:21 pm
Duskglimmer says...



I love the puppy... it's really adorable... I wish I could say something more constructive than that, but I'm not good at shading at all since I basically never try... All I can say is that the puppy is one of the cutest things I've seen all day...
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Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:23 pm
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You've made his day!
  





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Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:29 pm
Sam says...



Whee! Converses!

I can't really help you much with shading...it's a bit dark...:P But that's okay. Love 'em just the same.
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Sat Aug 27, 2005 6:07 am
Snoink says...



Puppy! *swoons*
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Sat Aug 27, 2005 6:09 am
Elizabeth says...



Sexy shoes

sorry i didn't post earlier. din din!
but yeah. adorable puppy!!! look at them eyes, awwwwwwwwwww
  





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Sat Aug 27, 2005 6:11 am
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He's all melty...like my dog...and my cat...:P That's a really cool effect! Must have taken loads of time to figure out...
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Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:49 am
Emma says...



I love the shoes and puppy! whooo!! Draw more, or... I dont know...

Hmmm
  





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Sat Aug 27, 2005 9:14 pm
electricbluemonkey says...



The shoelaces speak to me. No, actually, they look really weird.

But YAY! The drawings are pretty good.
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 6:02 pm
PsyLynx says...



The puppy is yummy, the shoe is just a well-drawn shoe...which doesn't appeal to me too much, per se, but that is simply because I don't really pride myself on being a connosieur of the footwear arts.
  





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Fri Sep 23, 2005 9:41 am
Nox says...



I like the shoe (or is it trainers?).
Good job, this is better than anythink I come up with.
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 5:58 pm
JustLaugh says...



I love the shoe!
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 6:46 pm
Rydia says...



The puppy is cute and well drawn though the shading could be better. Also, I love the shoe but it looks rather flat. Try and set yourself a challenge next time and sketch from a more interesting angle so that it's more 3D. Very good though.
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 8:44 pm
Sponson Light says...



Hoooray 2005! That was a good year.
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