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Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:53 am
Twinkling Starz says...



I like it! I love abstract things, and I too, would hang it on a wall...
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 12:08 pm
Nox says...



This reminds me of the weird but funny art done by Quinten Blake. I love it. :D
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 12:34 am
Alice says...



Very cool, you either colored too much or not enough, pick which one you prefer, but there is defiently a color problem here. I love abstract, mostly the blunt swirls and things like that though, but I found this to be a rather interesting piece of art.
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 1:52 am
Via says...



It's very fun! I like abstract art. I would suggest filling the page, though, kind of like an Escher thing. Really cool though.
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 10:23 am
Rydia says...



I'm not too into abstract art but this is pretty cool. Perhaps it would be better if you varied the faces slightly?
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:15 am
JC says...



Abstract isn't much my thing, by I do quite adore this. The only thing that bugged me was that the edges of the corners were square with the few dots coming off it...I think it would do well if it were smoothed out just a tad.

Other than that, great job, keep up the good work!

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Thu Jul 19, 2007 3:19 am
Alteran says...



Abstract is so my thing. I really like it but i agree you should fill the whole page. And, i love the way you filed the colour but i think a bit more wouldn't hurt.

Nicely done. Kinda like a few people standing out from a crowd.
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Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:12 am
Elizabeth says...



I liked it too but I can't tell you why either... :D I LOVED ALL THE COLORLESSNESS :D
  








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