You're comic is awesome.
Regardless of any lame grammar mistakes.
Spectacular drawings. But its certainly a tad confusing. It's not very clear whats going on.
Keep it up.
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~
Oh and rincewind, I saw your sig and wanted to try something like it.
~The bandit’s body stumbled backwards and fell to the ground, head hitting the pavement with an stomache sickening splutch, his face gone. The delayed blood flow from his head caught up as the body twitched its last death spasm, kicking up dirt into its gushing wounds.~
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
That last comic was of pure amatuer quality. It would be professional if you coloured itin , since your so good at that too.
Haha, good venture into the world of gorey writing. I liked it. Spasm is a friggin awesome word too, in my humble opinion.
I like how he died, and kept the story going, like in Foonkerpop.
Im addicted now, keep it up homeslice.
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~
Rince, its now inked! But inking takes forever, so either half the comic with ink, or keep it in pencil.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
AGH BUT IT'S SO CONFUSING!
Life death, concious?
Gosh... heh. Really neat...
(Seriously that girl looks like me..)
But confusing *nods*
As for the uninked one with the orbs, I found that a wee bit funny... Just me opinion though.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
this is a really cool little comicstrip thing, i like the idea and, i really am waiting for the next part, this is cool.
Life's a B*tch, slap it upside the head.
Dargquon Ql'deleodna: (n) "Dar-qu-on Kel-del-ode-na" something i made up that sounded cool, partially based off of the Drow Drizzt Do'Urden's name style
That one was well written as well as well drawn. Well well well.
I like where the stories goin, with the girl being his sub conscience. And its a good original look at post-death experiences. Something I'm quite a fan of myself. You wisely choose the pictures in each box, or "shots" if you will. It so much better than having two people in static poses with speech bubbles above their heads. You are off to a good start, and after many more, and years of experience, I can see you starting a solid book. Once again, the offer is still on the table about getting together and co-producing a strip with really in depth storyline/s, and solid realistic characters. I've tried my hand at comics in my time, my best one was called Blank Stare, I made like six, but I've lost them.
So, ya ya, keep it up. My MSN crapped out for some reason, talk to you soon maybe.
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
spiffy. I cant wait to see what comes of this guys mind.
REad my pickle story pleeeease. Everyone ignores me.
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~
Just so instead of me posting my stuff here and like 4 other forums, just check and book the site.
Site is in alpha by the way, theres like nothing but the comic there.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
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