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Can you Tell Who it is? What Can I Do to make him Better?



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Fri Dec 05, 2008 4:53 pm
Kaylyn says...



Nooo, you didn't. Why? *sobs* A great piece of artwork, lost forever.
As your pretty, so be wise,
Wolves may lurk in every guise.
  





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Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:16 pm
Explosive_Pen says...



Bah, 'tis Robert Patinson!
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."
  





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Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:32 am
Behind Scene Walls says...



This is really good!!!!It's Edward



.His eyes are a little to big and so are the lips
.It looks like he's tired of what is under the eyes

Besides that it's awesome
Regret is the main thing you hate in a society
because you are always regretting the thing that was regretful.
  





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Fri Dec 19, 2008 3:51 am
vox nihili says...



I could tell you it sucked, but that would be a lie. I would be proud to draw this. I draw stuff like this all the time. Yes it's worthy of public exhibiton! ;)
Voxina
  





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Fri Dec 19, 2008 4:09 am
Dreamworx95 says...



It's Robert Pattinson! OR Edward Cullen. Whichever works for you.

Aww, don't cry!

Well, since you threw it away, I'll offer you advice on how to make the new one better. Draw it on lighter paper and make it just a tad less shaded.

Hope it works out for you!

Ciao baby,

Dream,

XOXO
  








He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart