Young Writers Society

I did this for my friend Wardah on her birthday (BTW I did buy her a present as well! I am not a complete cheapskate) Took me three hours and I still hate it, but she has it now so I cannot change it anymore. Oh well. I suppose I have an unhealthy tendency to overdraw things.

One of the Jonas Brothers and I think it is Nick. I don't like them and I don't really know what this particular Brother looks like, so I can't really tell if he is recognisable. He just looks like him from Mcfly to me. Oh well.
Comments on how I could improve in like, technique and schizz would be mucho appreciated.
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Oh and ps, HOW COOL IS THIS GUYS HAIR? MY HOOBIE, IT DESERVES TO BE A CELEBRITY IN ITSELF.
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It looks so good!! You're really talented!! I recognized him right away. (not that I'm like in love with him or anything... ) But really good job!! and the har looks really really cool! congrats ona job well done!!

Raimunda wrote:I did this for my friend Wardah on her birthday. Took me three hours and I still hate it, but she has it now so I cannot change it anymore. Oh well. I suppose I have an unhealthy tendency to overdraw things.

One of the Jonas Brothers and I think it is Nick. I don't like them and I don't really know what this particular Brother looks like, so I can't really tell if he is recognisable. He just looks like him from Mcfly to me. Oh well.
Comments on how I could improve in like, technique and schizz would be mucho appreciated.
xxxxx

Oh and ps, HOW COOL IS THIS GUYS HAIR? MY HOOBIE, IT DESERVES TO BE A CELEBRITY IN ITSELF.
X

wow.
this is pretty good
except for the nose...
its a little too bulkly at his eyes for nick jonas, ya know what im saying?
his noes is bigger at the bottom then at the top by the eyes. (look at picture)
his hair is perfect!
and his eyes look a little shaggy though.
like he's sleep deprived.
but other then that its great!
thats very nice to give your friend for her birthday

Wow!! This really does look like Nick! Who cares if somethings were slightly off (I don't :p) and seeing that you don't like them, i can totally see how you wouldn't bother to get everything correct. This was really good! The shading was great-- and the hair! The hair is incredible . Do post more of your work soon! I love it!

I really liked this. I also noticed it right away. And yes, I would agree with you the his hair deserves to be its own celebrity. I think you did really well on this. If I was the person you gave it to, I would frame it and put in on my wall. Haha. Nice Job! Your very skilled.

Oh my lardy!!!
That is so awesome, it looks so dynamic!!
>.< Nick is the best Jonas brother to draw.
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Wow I think this is really good. The shading really is what gives this picture that edge The hair is very good as well, you havea lot of texture in there which is why it looks so detailed on that, so well done.

I would work on the jumper, I know it is not as important as the face (Or that brilliant hair!) but at the moment it looks a bit rushed and coloured in a bit hurridley compared to the rest of the picture, which pulls attention away from the face.

Other than that I really like this - well done, keep it up.

Meevs
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Okay. WHO IS NICK JONAS???? Am I just that out of touch with the world? Sould I feel totally horrible for not knowing him?

Well, since I don't know him, I can't really say that he looks or doesn't look like who he's supposed to. So, I'll look at it from an artistic point of view.

Since, you already gave it to your friend, there's not much point in me saying "fix this" even though I don't see anything to fix. Your shading was great and the textures were good as well. Based on the picture, his face might be a little thinner, but yours makes him look more little-kid-cute.

I liked it!

-Sea-

That is really good but, it should be Joe Jonas but,if your friend is a Nick Jonas fan than I accept.

I dolike this, don't get me wrong, but his face is tilted. I.E. his eyes aren't on the same line and his left nostril is longer than the other. I know that I would be only to notice that, but I did notice it. But it is still very good.

Ohh my that is wicked!!!

I love it! You dont need to do anything to it its wicked!!!

Love
rebbecca(Joe Jones fan)