I don't usually do pictures like this, but it was for my art homework and i had to make everything in proportion. i know one eye is slightly bigger than the other but what face is perfect? please review! all comments welcome
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You know, I wish I could draw like that. Lol. I can draw, but I have to erase things so many times to get the proportions right... ><
The only thing I can see is her neck doesn't look quite right-is it further in on one side?
Love the eyes. The hair is good too- but shouldn't you see it going right to the neck- you know, where you see the hair hanging from the back of your head? If you get what I mean.
The hairclip and flower are a nice touch, but where's your trademark stars?
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You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder
All true wisdom is found on T-shirts
Wow. Just Wow. You seem to be a great poet and a professional drawer. Even I can't draw like that. If you come to our school, our art teacher would have made you her pet student. Your drawing is marvelous.
Okay, in the picture you had used deep brush work and dark outlines to draw the eyes. The eyes are the best part of a face. Ever seen a picture of a face, and can you guess how he/she looks like without seeing their eyes? No. The eyes should have it's emotions shown to understand the whole picture.
Well, I can say that this was a great picture and most beautifully drawn. Well done.
And good luck.
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If I didnt have such high standards I would say it's very good but I have always had extremely high standards with everything involving art! The eyes have no emotion at all...the eylashes...theres something wrong there... and her face is expressionless.
Your very talented... I know because anyone but me would say this is fantastic.
Your very good at drawing hair and flowers but need to work more on facial fetures and shading can add a lot of depth and emotion and make the picture pop.... this looks unfinished but you can improve it and post it again because if you can do hair that well I'm sure you can do the rest to!
Thanks, as i said im not so good with faces but i did this for my art homework like a year ago and it was just about proportions so if you look at my other stuff im sure you might find something you like more
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You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder
All true wisdom is found on T-shirts
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