Young Writers Society

Yeah, hey. Guess who? Guess what?

So, I have the first chapter of my manga up.

WARNING: Last three pages were terribly drawn TT.TT

Yeah.

Cover page = http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 1 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 2 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 3 - http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 4 - http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 5 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 6 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 7 - http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 8 - http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 9 - http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 10 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 11 - http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 12 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 13 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 14 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 15 - http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 16 - http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Page 17 - http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/ ... mangel.jpg

Your cover art is incredible! I love the colors you chose as well as the way its drawn. Unfortunately my computer is too slow to load the others pages, but it seems as if this manga would be a good read.

8D
Well at least you saw the cover art.
Thanks so much!
Sorry. ^^;

IK love how you draw. I still can't seem to draw someone over and over and over again in diffrent posistions...

But. I would recomend not putting a whole paage of words on two sepreat pages. (9 10) As you go along you want to input it so the reader doesn't get bored. (just a thought) ANd I would recomend takeing each page into paint and typing up the words from the bubbles. (you could erase the words and type them up....) Um... That's all I got for now.

Beatiful work though.

Have a good day!

Amber

Ah, yeah, my dad said that. 'Too much text kthx'. xD I just didn't know what to cut out. And yeah, I need to do that. But that would be so hardddd TT.TT

Woot! that was awesome! I can't seem to sit down long enough and be so determined as to get that far with my art work. I also like the cover and good characters! GO TWIN POWER!!! lol.

LOL, thanks Sam. Yeah, considering I'm a twin, I figured I might as well stick a pair in their 8D xD