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i'm a wannabe photographer... but alls i am is a girl with a unprofessional digital camera. =P comments or critiques please? feel free to be harsh- thanks.

on the outside of my house's doorstep, there is this light. it was a wet day.



a street by my house- it looked awesome in the sunset. another wet day.



a fire hydrant standing in front of a house... i thought it looked like a guard so i took a picture. same day.



and a totally different shot. some nifty looking flowers.

these are really cool. i especially like the last one as you capture lots of detail in the foreground

Agreed, very nice detail in the last one, I love the colours and the different textures. Not particularly keen on the first one, I think the contrast and colour would look a lot better if the light was on. The second one looks lovely - very peaceful. And yeah, the fire hydrant does look like a guard.

Cool pictures specially the one of the flower that looks like a spiky ball that's going to explode any minutes.

Only pictures i didn't like were the first picture because its blurry and the fire hydrant which looks like you've used Photoshop to paste it in the picture. Good photo's though

thanks for the comments guys!

and yeah, i think i blurred the first shot wayy too much. and it's a bit uninteresting. and editing pictures are not my specialty.

thanks for all the critiques guys! =D

These are neat.
I thought the fire hydrant was a little random, but that's all right. It looked a little odd in the picture, as Firestalker pointed out.
The flower is really cool. What are those called. I think I might have some in my garden.

The first picture is very artistic, and there is something about it that catches my eye. It would be better if it wasn't so blurry, though.

I enjoyed the pictures!

-Sea-

wow your pictures are great the first one is a little blurry, but it is still good i really like the second one it looks so cool i like how there are no cars on the street or parked on the curbs the third one is really pretty i like how the flower you took a picture of is different than all the rest of them it makes it look so great over-all these are all really good great job

happy picture taking

-sport

Wow these are some niffty pictures!
my absolute favorite is the picture of the street. i love how almost pure it looks.
The picture of the light is a little off to me maybe it could be shot by a different angle.
the last picture of the flowers is sooo cute!

Awesome job!
-Tiffany

Streetlight: I really like this one. Great composition and I love the texture of the bricks.

Street/sky: The sky is beautiful in this one but the street's a bit boring. I think I'd have liked it more if you'd focused in on the sky more. Also it looks like the camera was at a bit of an odd angle...

Hydrant: I really like the hydrant and the bold color but I think the back ground looks kind of cluttered.

Flowers: This is so lovely. ^__^ I wish my flower close ups came out that well. THe contrast of the purple petals and teh yellow centers is gorgeous.

Overall, really nice work. I think you have talent. ^_^

Awesome pictures. I think you have a talent for photography.
I liked the first picture of the light. You can see the texture of the bricks really well.
The street pic was not my fave. I think it would look better if it was sunny out.
The fire hydrant one is cool. It looks like it's as tall as the house in the background.
The flower one is the greatest. I like all the colors and stuff.
Overall, good job.
Hershey