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Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:46 am
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Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:35 pm
Teague says...



That is really pretty... although I think it'd be better if the focus was more on the face & the rose and less of the body was showing. And the leaf covering the rose is a bit obnoxious as well.

But I like the concept! Not sure why, but I like it. ^_^

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Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:22 pm
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Pretty cool. It is a little out of focus. I think it would be pretty in a better sepia.
Also if you had more of the rose, that would be better.
I like it though.

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Sun Mar 02, 2008 8:56 pm
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I agree with Razor. It's a really nice picture, but you don't know whether to focus on the rose or the person.

If the rose were maybe a bit more centered with the face closer to it, then it would be an even better picture.

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Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:09 pm
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Hmm...this is an interesting picture but the position of the person looks awkward, like she's falling asleep or something. There is too much person in it and not enough rose. I don't really like it in black and white, having it in black and white really makes the cheek of the person stand out more than it should. Is there anyway we could see this picture in color? I think it would look better but that's just me.

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Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:55 pm
omggdariannnn says...



this is super duper pretty. i love the roses but the focus should be more on the face.
i like the B&W, too.
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Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:34 pm
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This is beautiful but....CROP IT. Crop it so that you cant see any of the body, or at least less of it. Honestly, it will look 100 times better.

You know...you should edit it (e.g cheat) so that she's (your?) not smelling the first rose, but the second. Would look pretty. x
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:24 am
vamplord12 says...



good pic, very good pic, but i also have to agree with everyone else...it would look better with more of the face and the roses, andless of the body, but who am i to deny a female body...ok...just...forget i said that
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Tue May 13, 2008 3:37 am
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Sniffing the roses are we tif tiff? I would be the best picture ever if it wasn't for the fatty in it.
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Tue May 13, 2008 7:34 pm
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zoeybird13024 says...



This picture is really elegant--I liked it! I especially liked how it was in black and white. Did you take it in color or in black in white? I've watched my friend change the color of pictures before. Also, I think it would be really pretty if you could show just the color of the rose. Unless the rose is white...but, in any case, you could 'color' the rose in the photo to bring attention to it. Just a suggestion!

I liked how her (your?) eyes are closed, like they're in deep concentration or thinking about something when they see the rose.

This is completely irrelevant, but I like that scarf!!!

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