Young Writers Society

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/ ... Sunset.bmp

I was twelve when I drew this one...it took me some time but I was proud when I did it. I think this is a very meaningful piece of work...ofcourse this is what I think--I really would like to know what you think about this...thanks.

I love the sunset, its such a glorious thing. I've never seen the sunrise though, so I cannot compare.

You deffinately got some good sunset colours in there, a shame it was on lined paper though,

This is a beutiful sunset, I really liked it.

Its very good. Though the waves need to be more wavy like, if you know what I mean... But you did say you did it at age 12 so I'll let you off.

Yeah its a tad unrealistic however you were 12 so hey!
( sorry I'm very perticular with my art )

I thought it was lovely, the color's great! Is it over water? the hills? I gathered rippling water beneath the sun, cast over by red and orange.

Neat colors, yeah the ocean or whatever is unrealistic, but I really like having a red sun there. That makes it look really cool.

Yeah, I agree. The ocean is pretty unrealistic, looks more like waves or something. You should have done smaller, longer waves.

But overall, it was pretty good. Nice use of colors.

Good for 12.

zelithon wrote:Good for 12.

You say it like you start off better when you get older.
Or you instantly start out good when your older.
Like being able to draw Michaelangelo good when your 45 and you just started.
You realize there are children who cant draw at all at 12 or some children who can already draw better than everyone on this board at 12.
Age doesnt matter.

I dont undertsand why people say it like it does.

The blending of the red and yellow of the sky isnt very smooth.