Hi OverEasy! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site so far.
Hokay, so about the photos:
The first one has a neat subject, but I would like to see more focus on the main tree, just a little bit sharper overall. Is it a tree or a bush, or...? Well, either way, it's a neat photo.
This one is great. I love the precipitation on the window, because it really allows you to focus on the girl's face. Her glasses are great; they really add interest to the picture. Is she a friend of yours? She has a nice face.
The third one I kind of expect to eat me... The flower's a little blurry and too in-your-face for my taste. Probably my least favorite of the bunch.
This fourth picture has a nice angle, but the front flower is too blurry, as are some of the closer flowers. The background is sharp, but the foreground is fuzzy. Doesn't quite work...
I like the idea of this fifth picture, and I love the girl's red hair, but I would have preferred a different color lipstick, or maybe hold the applier thingy at a different angle so it didn't blend in with her lips quite so much.
The sixth picture has really interesting colors. I like it, but flower pictures are just done too often for it to really stand out to me.
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that picture of the tree is beautiful. I also really like the one of you at the window. that one has a great sense of mood.
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I love the second and fourth pictures. The second has a really nice mood to it, and your face is so gorgeous! The flowers in the fourth one are nice, but as Areida said, it should have been focused more on the foreground.
Good work!
I love the first one. Such a pretty tree. Full of curves and twisted branches.
The second one not as much. Maybe you could have set this up a bit more. Like had you hand on your chin like you where thinking and you could be staring out the window unaware of the camera... XD
The third one... I like the flower its very cool. I like how the water has formed little bubbles on the leaves. Maybe you could have taken it from a different angel. Like looking onto a petal or something.
The fourth one... I like the background and the flowers, but the nearest flower is a bit blurry.
The fifth one. Love it. The angel the pose the scene everything nice!
The last one is a bit bland. The flower looks a bit battered and the angel is weird.
Nice work!
Genevieve
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