The figure in the first one is good but you need to go over some of your pencil lines, tidy it up a bit and maybe add some more colour or shading. It's rather hard to see what's going on at the moment as Twit said.
I guess I don't get whats going on here? The first is okay, but I have no idea what's happening. The second frame/box of frames is not clear enough to make anything out of.
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