I guess I'm completely missing the connection between the first frame and the second two? This also needs to be rated, harsh language always needs a rating. Just click on "edit" on your first post in here and it will bring up the edit page and just add a rating.
I think you need to work on your style a little. You keep varying it. Personally, I preferred it without the coloured background. I think it would be better if you either kept it in black and white and added shading to make them stand out a little more or if you coloured it all in. The drawing of the boy in the top frame is good though. I like the detail on his clothes but the sash and the weapon need more work on the shading and I'm still finding it difficult to follow your plot line.
"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..." — Gone With the Wind
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