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Her violin is kind of lopsided but other than that i thought this was pretty good...

Her legs look a little funny to be, but perhaps that's because she's floating in space and not actually walking on something.

That is so beautiful! Is there any way you could enlarge the photo so I could see the details?

I love the red dress and hair, and the hand holding the violin. Her face is lovely, too.

I think her legs are a little too short; either that or her knees are too far down on them. It makes her appear a little stubby.

The background is awesome. It makes her really stand out. Thanks for posting this! ^_^

Oh, would that I had Photoshop! Anyway, it's a good picture.

Oh, I really like this. I even like that the violin is lopsided. I think that if there was a background the lopsidedness of some things would be more important, but since it doesn't have a real background, and then comes across as more of a conceptual (is that the right word...?) piece, so it really looks good as is. I think you should leave it so that you can keep the feeling.

Awesome job.

Love Muffin

Pretty! I'm just gonna be unhelpful and say I liked it--no one jump me!

Is the left hand holding the violin the wrong way around?

I really love this. Especially her hair and dress and her expression. Is there a larger version of this? Would love to see what else you have =]

In general, this is very good but the left arm is a little thin and long and the fingers need some work. Also, I think the violin isn't placed quite right but I love the dress and the hair and the background is very colourful. Your shading is good, your proportions are generally very accurate and overall this is really well drawn so keep up the good work!

I love the colors and this! Pretty dern good! However, I'll reinforce the issue with the legs...other than that is very good!

I think that the person is lovely. I don't like the background so much, though. Her right arm, for example, blends too well and seems to disappear, and a similar thing with her left hand. But I really like the green down by her feet!

The arms are a tad fat...but other than that, amazing. Beautiful.

wow...looks like the violinist is like depressed or failed something just because of the facial expressions. You really did an extremely good job with the drawing and I hope to see some more

I love the way her hair flows out. The colors are really neat too; I never would have thought to pair the red with that particular background. A few of the proportions look slightly off (i.e. the bent violin, her legs a little shorter than you'd expect for her long arms) but I really like it all the same. Nice!

I really like this.
The only thing that is bothering me are the feet.

Any way, the dress fits so well. And the green-yellow that breaks the dark red. Absolutely stunning!

Very nice