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Sat Sep 22, 2007 5:22 pm
black13de says...



What do you think about this photograph that I took in Jogjakarta?
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Sat Sep 22, 2007 5:25 pm
GingerLizzy says...



Ooh I like this.

The water looks really still and I like how it;s kinda two toned. If that makes sense. I also like the fact that there is undergrowth and trees in the foreground, sort of framing the water.
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:27 pm
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...it doesn't show up for me?
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:24 pm
Ego says...



I think you should cut the chat speak and let us focus on your work. ^_^

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Mon Sep 24, 2007 10:47 am
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:54 pm
Leja says...



I think that you could crop parts of it to show exactly what you were looking at when you took the picture. Ex: I might crop out the trees on the left and right, or I might crop out the sky and most of the mountains in the background to tighten the focus, as there are alot of clouds. Otherwise, it's a pretty picture, in general :D
  





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Mon Sep 24, 2007 11:10 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



I really like the colors of the water. They're absolutely gorgeous... I love those shades of blue.

The only thing I don't really like is the red numbers in the corner. I guess that can't be helped, and that's not actually part of the photo, but... yeah.

So, this was good. :)

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Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:42 pm
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I can finally see it and it is so pretty. It is so warm and the clouds look like steam. If you wanted to crop it you should cut out the part of the fallen tree trunk.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:28 am
Alteran says...



it is a very nice picture. Obviously the date needs to be removed. It doesn't really have a main focus point, this is like a calander picture. If you were aiming at a certain thing or point you should use the crop suggestion to help remove anything that distracts from it.

A pretty photo, I like it very much.
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