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Sat Sep 08, 2007 3:05 am
Twinflower says...



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Sat Sep 08, 2007 4:33 am
Alteran says...



It looks pretty cool. I think you need some more shading to increase the look of depth. It looks kinda flat right now.

Her face is very well done.
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:28 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



I agree with the comment above about the shading, but apart from that this is really great :)
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 10:06 pm
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Arr, matey! :pirate3:

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Mon Sep 10, 2007 10:14 pm
CK Lynn says...



Very cool! The eyes were off, though.
  





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Mon Sep 10, 2007 11:21 pm
Sponson Light says...



Love the general shape, don't dig those patterns in her skin though. They look like scars. You know what looks nice? Her expression.
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 11:40 pm
Via says...



Hey, that' not too shabby at all! I would suggest maybe a little shading or so to make it a little more "life like" but it's pretty sweet! I say the best part is the eyes.
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