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Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:57 am
EmiSukotto16 says...



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Sat Sep 01, 2007 1:38 am
Knurla says...



Love the first one, Jess!
It has that mysterious touch to it.
The second is...too dark around the studded bracelet, and (even though I love your shoes) the shoes didn't fit the "feel" of the picture, know what I mean?
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:40 am
-Save-Ferris- says...



I quite liked the first one. I think you need to go into. Photoshop and reduce some of the highligts on the piano keys. It was pretty cool though.

And the second one was too dark adn the conerse didn't really fit. Maybe even fi you ust used a black converse it would look better (:
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 1:02 pm
Rydia says...



I think the first one is great. You have such an awesome angle and the lighting is good but perhaps photoshopping the keys wouldn't be such a bad idea.

The second one on the other hand isn't so interesting but the angle is nice again.
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 5:53 pm
Cade says...



The photo quality isn't the best, but I liked the way you set things up and the colors in the shot. I also liked that the second shot (Converse) was angled.
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:05 pm
GingerLizzy says...



This is super clever. I liked the first, of the piano and it's a change from the guitar.

I love the converse =]
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:13 pm
Emerson says...



I like the first one. I think if you used an editing program to bring out colors or something like that it would be a lot cooler, but in general the angel of the picture is wonderful. I think it is cropped too much horizontally though--why can't we see all of the hands? Might have just been because of where the camera was placed.

They're both really cool. :)
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:14 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



These are both very good ideas :)
The first is my favorite.
I really like your converse too. :lol:
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Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:07 am
Via says...



I would like to see these in black and white over the color I think. Converse and Piano Keys both have a certain "black and white" look to them so I feel if the pictures following for them (the main focus) then it would stand out better to me?
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