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Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:15 pm
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:29 pm
Poltergiest says...



Oooo. I really like it. Uh, whats it from? And how'd you get it? Other than that stuff, yea, it was good.


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Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:55 pm
Rydia says...



Lol. That's pretty cool but it seems rather pointless and maybe you should have the glowy lines in different colours. I think that would look really good and you could have them coming from a wand or a person's hand or something.
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:32 pm
Alteran says...



It has a good technical aspect but as far as composition it's lacking.

I'm glad you figured out a new effect but you might want to try and find a more compositional use for it. It's a bit bland as it is.

Now you have a new technique for your art :)
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Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:41 am
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yay! i just found it and that was the first i made so...yeah. i'll do what kitty suggested. that sounds cool. :D
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Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:56 am
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It looks nice, but it's also a tad boring. Do like kitty said and put more oompf! into it.
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Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:38 pm
Layleun says...



Yay! Go swirly lines of glowlyness!! Woohooooo!!!

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Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:42 am
-Save-Ferris- says...



Hehe I thought it was pretty cool. I think you should make the lines different colours it would look way cool!
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:07 pm
Jennafina says...



Haha, nice. You know what would be cool? If you added a bunch of sparkly, glittery things like stars. xD

You seem to have figured out photoshop much more than I have. I don't understand it at all, lol.
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:13 pm
Areida says...



I like the idea of making the squiggles different colors. Or maybe different shades of blue or something, since it looks sort of like a nifty river of some sort.

I like it! You definitely have a better grasp of photoshop than I do. Of course... that's not saying much. ;)
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:36 pm
Jasmine Hart says...



Pretty.......it reminded me of smoke rising up from a fire.
Is it just me, or is this really mesmerizing? That's my completely inexpert opinion. :)
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:23 pm
sokool15 says...



I think it's cool. Really cool. A little pontless, perhaps...but since when did art need to have a point?

Right now it doesn't look to me like a piece of art. It looks like the beginning of a piece of art, before you've filled in the details, etc. I agree with Kitty, it might be better if you did different colors.

I feel, somehow, that I'm just echoing what everyone else just said, so I'll stop pestering you and say that I enjoyed your...piece. :)

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Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:30 pm
Via says...



It's fun, but kind of pointless??

It definitely looks cool, and makes me yearn for a photoshop program.
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:14 am
Phoenix57flame says...



Brilliant! Reminds me of a hurricane!
  





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Wed Sep 12, 2007 9:27 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



[sits and stares at the glowyness]


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