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Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:31 am
Knurla says...



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Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:01 am
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Both of these pics are wonderful, darling, though I especially like the Florida one! With Alabama, I would have liked to see maybe a bit more focus on the old barn itself--you can get wonderful shots with a location like that!

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Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:02 am
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Oh, I'm in love with the second one. *hugs it*

I just wanted to say that. :D [/not a photography buff]

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Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:32 am
Alainna says...



They are both lovely photos and the second one of Florida is very well shot.
It makes you feel peaceful. Ah.

The first one could be slightly better angled but that is such a minor thing.

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Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:30 am
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I agree about the focus you could have put on the barn shot, but I looove the second one.
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:34 pm
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These look just like dentist office posters! :D That's not a bad thing at all; they're beautiful and serene. Is there any way you could make the top one larger? I'd like to see all the little details.

I think you could crop them a little. In the top one, you could trim the right side, cutting away the blue thing under the tree. I don't know what it is, and it doesn't complement the picture's color scheme.

The bottom would look prettier if you cropped out the brown thing at the bottom. I can't tell what that is either; is it a beach? A railing?

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Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:22 pm
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Aww wow these are both really pretty and atmospheric.

The top one is the best. I think it shows slightly better photography skills and it is such an unusual sort of scene.

The second one is also really good though. I think it is so calm. I would have liked it to have been wider and have more sand in shot=[

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Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:55 pm
Via says...



The blue in the first one on the right is a little distracting and seems out of place. I might crop that out, if it were me. Good though!

The second is pretty too, but I'd ditch whatever is making the bottom border...you just can't tell what it is! =]
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:19 am
Rydia says...



The first one is gorgeous but a close up of the barn and trees might have been better and I agree with those who suggested cropping out the blue thing. It's a beautiful picture though.

The second one is very soothing but I've seen a lot of sea photos lately and I agree with taking out the barrier.
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