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Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:36 pm
sokool15 says...



Yay! It worked, so here's another one. These are all pretty rough sketches, but I just wanted to make sure there were no major flaws before I moved on.

I sketched this (my hand) during a boring English class. Where else?
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Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:54 pm
Rydia says...



This one is a bit clearer and it's good but I'd prefer more shading and perhaps a little more detail like freckles and such.
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Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:58 pm
Leja says...



The thumb doesn't have a knuckle; it looks like it's bending at an awkward angle. I like the shading; maybe if you feathered it a little farther into the rest of the hand?
  





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Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:06 am
Snoink says...



The thumb looks weird, so maybe adding some wrinkles or shading will help it be less straight and more curved.
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:40 am
Poltergiest says...



Really good. Its clear n'stuff. (I draw alot... Anyway...) I thought the thumb was a bit lond but stubby. The arm itself near the end was a little bumpy. Other than that I liked it!

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Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:25 am
Areida says...



I agree about adding a knuckle to the thumb, but other than that it looks really nice. Hands are so hard to draw, at least for me, and most people that I know, so I commend you. :D
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:56 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



Wow it's really good (:
The thumb is a bit stubby and you haev started fattening the arm out a bit soon.
I think it needs a bit more shading but brillaint

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Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:39 am
Alice says...



A very simple drawing, at the same time one of the hardest ones to do. The shadowing is brillantly done and even the shape of the arm is really good.

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