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Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:24 am
Alice says...



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After drawing this my arm is covered in sharpie.

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This too (my arm is still green, black and blue. My parents thought I had a messed up bruise before they saw those).
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:30 am
Lynlyn says...



These are cool, but sharpies are so hard to draw with! Wouldn't it be easier to use traditional water-based markers?

Your patterns are neat, they're very 60s-ish. I especially like the colors in the first one. The second one would be even cooler if it were a touch more symmetrical, in my opinion.

Also, rubbing alcohol usually takes off sharpie on skin, but do it in a ventilated area. Alcohol fumes + sharpie fumes = not good for your brain. 8D
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 4:16 am
sokool15 says...



Sorry, it just...really looks like a girl! *slinks away hiding face* :oops:

But don't tell her...ah, I mean him...I said that! Or else... :smt021

Cheers! ~ 8)
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 4:29 am
Alteran says...



I like them a lot. The second is my favorite. I really love the moon aspect to it. A very interesting concept.

Sharpies woot!
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 5:26 am
Empress Kat says...



that sort of double thing happens when you take two pics over the same frame of film(if you don't forward the film after you take a pic). Usually looks awesome if you take a pic of leaves or water then a portrait of someone.

called "Double Exposure"
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:05 am
Alice says...



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These are both still-lifes. The first was set up like that the second... well thats what the desk always looks like. Sad I know.
Last edited by Alice on Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:20 am
Emerson says...



They aren't really... artistic photographs. IMO.


They're just pictures of stuff.
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:53 am
Alice says...



Yeah they looked better in my minds eye, so I changed them a bit, they're now the still-lifes i took.
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:59 am
Leja says...



First of all, where's the monitor for the computer in the second picture? There's a keyboard and speakers, but no computer :D

I think they'd both look cool if you cropped them so that there's not so much wall/background space as there is subject.
  





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Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:05 am
Alteran says...



Claudette wrote:They aren't really... artistic photographs. IMO.


They're just pictures of stuff.


Says the Girl who took a picture of a pile of books. *pokes Clau* :)

I like the first one. The red of the sheets makes a great backdrop. Perhaps removing the pillows. They kinda later the balance of the picture, unless they're hiding something.

The second one seemed a bit cluttered though. To much happening at once. It would work a bit better with less stuff.

And where is your monitor!
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:10 am
Emerson says...



Claudette wrote:
They aren't really... artistic photographs. IMO.


They're just pictures of stuff.


Says the Girl who took a picture of a pile of books. *pokes Clau* Smile


I was commenting on other photos :p She got rid of them.

These ones are better. Although, I think the first one is too empty [crop it] and the second one is too busy/cluttered.
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:11 am
Alice says...



The monitor is on another desk/table thing, we couldn't fit it on the desk after we went pencil hunting, even before. Dang, I was hopin the sock on the light would come up, that was there for three days before my sister realized she was missing her favorite sock.
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:28 am
Leja says...



The second would be a good setting for an I Spy book ^.^
  





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Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:35 am
Alice says...



lol.

I spy two tape despencers.
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Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:29 am
Alice says...



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The box pile.

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The random bookshelf.



They are artistic (I felt the need to put that there, defensivly, they are art. In my mind at least, maybe not in yours.)
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