Young Writers Society

I was inspired yesterday to draw the characters from my book, and this is the result:
Tomas, the main character's impish little brother


And Cerinia, Tomas's twin. Her face is a little lopsided in this picture...
(Oh, and they're royal children, so the circlets on their heads are crowns)

Color, and proportions. Work on those.

Her neck's too big, but her dress is beautiful.

His neck is just funny looking, but his shirt is cool.

I insist that you add some color to this, not too much, but not just one spot and then nothing else. Color her dress, and their hair, and do some shading with the backround. That would make it look awesome.

I have to agree that both of them have really thick necks. Tomas' head should be a little larger, or his body a little smaller but the expression is good and I love his hair.

Cerinia has a pretty outfit but the necklace needs work, the neck is a touch too long as well as too wide and her face needs a little work. That's a rather awkward angle to draw from so you've done really well but it doesn't look quite right. Some colour would be nice too. Good work with these though.

The hair and face expresstions are really good and some of the detail is fantastic. They both have thick necks and the proportions of the heads and bodies need sorting. They both need some work done but hey are really good.

Both are nice. Thomas' arms are two differnt widths. his eyes are crooked. Other than that he looks really cool. Good job.

The girl's neck is a touch wide and perhaps a tad bit too long as well. Her shoulders seem off as well.

You did a great job on both of them though. And since they're in pencil you can edit them Their faces are well porportioned.

I like thier expressions, Tomas has a cheeky look about him, and Cerina looks like she's worried ^^

Her neck is a little too wide, but I'd love to see these in colour.

I agree with the necks and such, but Cerinia's face is a little odd, with the eye placement. Otherwise, good job.