Young Writers Society

He looks pretty cool but his hands are different sizes and I'd like to be able to see his face. Also, the shading could be better, a bit more gradual but the colours are a good choice and generally, it's very well drawn.

It looks cool. The arm with the pokeball is a bit to long. I see you tryrd to fix the show size but on is still bigger than the other.

Love the hair. Nifty little wind blown effect.

This is really good. the pose is good and everything is in proportion thought i think that the left hand (your right) loks to big. Also it doesn't look like he is holding the pokeball. Very good though and the colours are fantastic.

You might consider drawing on drawing paper, rather than notebook paper--it's hard to make the colors stand out like you want them too on notebook.

The hand is still a little large for my liking, and the absence of any eyes at all is odd, but I like your attention to detail.