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alaistair and abrienne in the rain



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Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:55 pm
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:05 pm
Rydia says...



I think you need to finish colouring this before I can critique it properly but as it stands, it looks pretty cool. I'm not sure that Abrienne would walk with her legs crossed like that and I can't quite tell what she's carrying but I shall leave further comments for the finished version...
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:25 pm
Saphira says...



Wow! That is really god. All the shadying looks fantastic and it is really good. I like the expressions and the poses though i think that the legs crossed looks wierd. I think it will look better when it is coloured but at the moment it looks fantastic!
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:20 am
Alteran says...



I can see you've done the wet clothes effect and it looks great. I think after you Colour it things will be uber sweet. And now they're pretty sweet anyway.

He looks a litte stalkerish with his eyes not done yet.
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