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Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:12 am
JC says...



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*All picture belong to other people, however, the editing that has been done to the pictures was by me. Thanks
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:13 am
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(it's only pixalated because it's smaller here than it should be...sorry)
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:41 am
Jennafina says...



Awesomeness. xD I love the bottom center picture. It's cool that you found all these, and the way you put them together is really nice. The whole thing is kind of haunting.

I don't like the placement of the words. At first, I didn't even noticed the "a" and wondered why it said "Resumed With FURY", lol. I think the words would look better if you put the "resumed with a" right above the red fury, or underneath it. Just something to try. ;)

The top left looks like evil Willow! *is a geek*
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 8:15 am
Alteran says...



I'm afraid of the top left. Looks Demonic.

I lilke the placement of the oictures and i agree with Jenna about the word placement. Not ideal. It makes it look unbalanced because A is on letter

Perhaps Resumed with a could be on the top and fury on the bottom.

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Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:36 am
Saphira says...



I really like this. I like how all the pictures are black and white with just the word FURY in colour. Again i agree that the words need to be placed differently. I couldn't even see the 'a' when i first looked at it.

I thought it was good! :D
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:15 pm
Rydia says...



Your choice of pictures is really good, though I'm not so fond on the top middle, and I love the way you've arranged them. I think the middle picture and the top left are my favourites and overall, it's very good. Love the format you've used for fury but not sure about the layout of 'Resumed with a' and not sure if you even need the other words.
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 6:47 pm
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I like it, I like how u have the pictures and the words.
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:51 pm
Via says...



Oh it's fun! My favorite is the top right one...the flying hair is awesome.

The bottom right one, however, looks to me to be really sad rather than mad..?

And the words are a little odd in the placement, yes, I agree.
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