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Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:35 pm
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Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:06 pm
Rydia says...



This one's rather cool but his face is rather hard to make out with his hair like that and the hat doesn't look so great.
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Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:34 am
Alteran says...



Nice use of colored pencil and regular pencil. Dobnt see that combination much. His expression is nice and the detail of the clothes is superb.

A little nitpicky but the width of the left show looks bigger than the other. Not a whole lot but some.

Alos is that blue like a back drop or another oictures cause I would like to see that.
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Fri Jun 22, 2007 12:21 pm
Myth says...



His feet must be really big to fit into those trainers... Something needs to be done so we can actually make out his facial features, I can only just about see the eyes and his grin, but he has no lips.
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:25 am
Pidgin_Princess says...



wow. yeah, the face definately needs some work. It seems to be the least detailed part of the picture, and I think you'd want it to be the focus...

otherwise, very cool. detailed, accurate, realistic (sorta).
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 9:13 pm
sokool15 says...



I don't know who in the world this is, but he looks cool! :wink:

Umm, the pants look a little...er...three-D. Not in a good way. It's hard to describe, but they look less like wrinkles and more like they're standing out from his body. RRRgh! Sorry. Ignore it if you can't figure out what I'm trying to say.

Viewer's right hand is a little funny.

Overall, cool though! (exactly who is he, anyway?)

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Thu Aug 09, 2007 9:48 pm
Lynlyn says...



I agree with SoKool, the way you shade things makes the clothes look a little strange. Perhaps if you just outlined the folds instead of filling them in completely with black, they would look a little more natural.
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Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:59 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



This is really really really well drawn. Your use of coloured and regular pencil adds a real atmosphere to the picture.
The expression is quite good but the left hand looks like it is holding onto an invisible walking stick. I wasn't really sure what was going on there =S

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