Young Writers Society

Listen to Streetlight Manifesto! They're coming to my city on the 12th!

I LOVE IT! The clothing is hanging a tad bit akwardly, but other than that its a pretty rockin' peice. For some random reason I feel the strong desire to give it a hug...hmm...

Anyway, excellent coloring.

I agree with Stirly. it should be made into a plushie so I can buy it -paying a great deal for it-and hug it to death. XD

It's rather cute but I'd like to see full colour!

kitty15 wrote:It's rather cute but I'd like to see full colour!

Full Color?! Okay, I try.

I saved the lineart for this occasion, all that shading and glow and smoke are all removable, yay me!

I love it! Oddly. The lines are very sloppy, and very awesome for this particular drawing. Woo! And yes, very plushie-like.

It's so cool! Porportions are great, the effects on his hands are beautiful.

My favorite part is the tattoo like things on his face.

awesome. Love the style. Ya' know what it reminds me of? The 1950's-esque intros to the new forms in Wario Ware: Smooth Moves. That and Midna from Twilight Princess.
[/nerd-rant]

This is great! I'd love to see the colour version.

whence wrote:awesome. Love the style. Ya' know what it reminds me of? The 1950's-esque intros to the new forms in Wario Ware: Smooth Moves. That and Midna from Twilight Princess.
[/nerd-rant]

When you play TP for the Wii, anything will remind you of Midna.

It's so cute! I really like the cloth, the shading is wonderful. His eyes are so realistic, they look wet and shiny. The fire or smoke on its hands is cool too.

My only critique is its front foot. It looks like the sole of its foot is pointing at us, and I think it should be more of a side view like its back foot.

Color would be awesome. B)

Truth be told, I'm not coloring it.

Other truth to be told, I drew another picture, and I'll be coloring that

Here, I'll walk you through it.

Under sketch, since Ill be doing this on the computer, it doesn't really matter how detailed it is. It just needs the basic underlying principals such as general pose and clothing.


-------
Edit:
Step 2

You can see this is the part where I change the composition. The tail was changed to go with the clothing and hair, and the horns were shortened while the bracer was enlarged to keep with the original design.

Wow, that's really cool. I like that you show us step one and then two.

I cant see anything that needs fixing. Just colour it in and show us

Most important part, criticism!
I got some c&c, and so I fixed a few perspective problems, pose problems, and then changed the composition.





Edit:
Hay! Listen! Listen! Hay! Listen! Hay! Listen! Listen! Listen!

Double Post finished product!


Edit: Okay, maybe its not so very finished, give me a sec.

Merged those two

They look cool. Didn't expect that colour or the apple but it looks sweet.