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Which Sword do you perfer?

Sword Number 1
6
40%
Sword Number 2
1
7%
Sword Number 3
8
53%
 
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Mon Jun 18, 2007 7:11 am
Alteran says...



This is the first promo pic for the MMORPG, YWS Adventures.

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Mon Jun 18, 2007 5:33 pm
Rydia says...



I like the energy balls and the characters eyes are very freaky!
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Poor Imp says...



A pink sword, Adam? o0'

Ha, on the note of levity, I love the arbitrary dash of different weapons and electricities in the thing. Still, the colours are a little garish - clash, don't they? Then again, it may merely be an impish aversion to pink. ^_^






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Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:45 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Love the sword design, hate the colors. ;)
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Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:48 pm
Meshugenah says...



er.. pink, Adam? Kill the pink on the sword, please. Other than that it looks pretty darn good!
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Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:54 pm
Doctor Kitty says...



Colors are quite wonky.

Nifty particle effects. (Those are particle effects right? I'm noobish when it comes to modeling and whatnot.)
  





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Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:47 am
Via says...



Ah, it's pretty good. The shoulders are a little too broadish for my liking, and maybe through in a spiraling piece of paper or something? Pretty sweet, though.
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:09 am
Alteran says...



Pink huh?

That is due to lighting. It's red. It's supposed to be enrgy fluctuations on the sword but that obviously didn't land. Here are three versions of the sword: 1. reduced lighting effect. 2. same sword in pic 3. red effect removed all together.

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Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:10 am
Alice says...



that dude looks funny, but as in the new swords the last one is best. pick that one.
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 4:37 am
Bella says...



I like the first one, it looks pretty red compared to the others. Also, out of curiousity, is that guy supposed to be you? Since that's your sword, isn't it? Oh, when do you make me?!?! *concieted moment...there goes my ego* *Smacks self* Ok, i'm better now.
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 7:02 am
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Okay! Scratch all that stuff. Vote if you want but this is way better. New promo:

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and the new sword: Alterra

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Tue Jun 19, 2007 7:14 am
whence says...



are you asking for our opinions on the lighting between the two nwe ones? Because the second is waaaay better
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:43 pm
CK Lynn says...



The swords in all seem too bulky. They don't really fit in the picture. Something sleeker and more jedi would go with the sci-fi look.
  





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Tue Jun 19, 2007 7:12 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



I like the newest one! :votes: :D
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:17 pm
Alice says...



Adam that is sooo much better, there is no color confusion, its supposed to be purple right? (ha ha i'm evil) Anyways its so much better. But the dude's eyes look creepy.
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