Young Writers Society

only pg-13 because apparently it is a real tattoo that really is evil.

What!?

Are you serious! But it's on my computer now! AhH! what was that sound!

looks nice.

is it just me, or if you stare at the pupil does it flash a picture of a burning cross every minute or so?

Ah, you know, it's alright. It could use some color, and substance. But you don't mess with evil things XD

It doesn't show up too well on my computer but it looks interesting =)

EH? what's evil about this?

and how come the lines are so very thin??

and sure it could do with some colouring.

are you related to Count Olaf, i mean the tatto of an eye... *shifty eyes*

Whence, i think you are hallucinating.

I don't know whats evil about it my sister (whos into wicca and stuff like that) and my dad (who's watching nothing but the history channel) said it was, and the lines are so small because I drew this and scanned it.

Personally, I would compact the outer designs a bit closer to the eye itself and do some varying line-thickness work.

the border was pure boredom, next time i draw this (which may be never) i'll have to use a crayon or something, because pure pencil doesn't work with this.

i don't get it...but it is hard to see...

MisterWaffles wrote:Personally, I would compact the outer designs a bit closer to the eye itself and do some varying line-thickness work.

A second to Waffles' wise remarks. ^_~

Doubtless, evil ought to be better defined if its to catch the eye of observers. ^_^





IMP

Ooh! It's scary! xD

I like Waffle's idea of moving the lines closer to the eyes. Also, I think you should thicken the lines so they stand out better. I bet this would be wonderful colored.

i Like it. It doesn't show up on my computer to well but i like what i can see. The border is really nice but i think the lines could be darker. Very creepy. It seems to follow me!

It does look like Count Olaf's tattoo. I won't say what others have said already but I do like the border wih the centred eye. But I wouldn't want that thing on me.

Dude- the history channel is like, my life, and I've never heard it say anything about an eye tattoo be evil.

Its all drawn well, but the whole thing seems rather dull. Theres nothing about that really steals the imagination and makes one want nothing more than to study each and every inch of it. Its nice, and its a cool idea, but its not exactly breath taking. Still, thats just my opinion. I'm rather weird, so it may be best if you just sort of ignored me