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Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:58 pm
Rydia says...



I think the others caught the slight problems but she is really pretty! I'm glad that you made her hair a darker shade of red than Ginny's (Or at least darker than I imagine Ginny's) and the style is really pretty.
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:50 pm
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Baroness Ink wrote:Whoop! Can you say, "Ariel hair"?

A couple of things:

1. The wand
...stubby and chunky. XD

2. The eyes
are not almond-shaped or startlingly green!! :twitches:

3. The color of her vest/tie
are Gyffindor colors, and they're supposed to be grey, I think, at least until second year.

4. The freckles look like zits! Try a browner color. :P

Other than that, I like it. :D


WOOT FOR ARIEL!

Harry, his mums, and Lily never quite hit the almond shaped eye mark, for me. Same goes for the eye color. I hate green eyes that are too green, and Lily (the older one) always had dark green eyes in my happy, little imagination for some reason.

O.o Why gray? Gah- oh well :D It was a screw up anway, considering there was no way she could know her colors just yet. Still, it would have broken my colorscheme if I went with anything else, and I really like the way gold sets off her hair.

Yeah... they do look like zits.

Anyway, I shall one day fix those problems. As soon as I get a tablet, I'll start working on it!
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:20 am
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Lily is really good. A few points, I like the freckles but thought there should be fewer. Her wand sould be a bit more cylinder shaped, not so pointed at the ned.

I love the magic swirl.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 5:06 am
Pushca says...



Baroness Ink wrote:3. The color of her vest/tie
are Gyffindor colors, and they're supposed to be grey, I think, at least until second year.


In the books there was never a mention of vests or ties. The movie, I don't know.
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 12:36 am
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Tonks:
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I friggin' love babysitting. I made 40 bucks sitting around coloring with markers for 4 hours while the kids watched Clifford. An excellent Hermione picture also came out of it, but the dark hair is having difficulties with the yellow skin.
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 3:42 am
Alteran says...



Pink hair! I love it!

Nice work. Her eyes stand out very nicely.
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Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:12 pm
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I think Tonks looks a little young but the hair is awesome!
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Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:01 pm
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Three cheers for spiky pink hair!
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Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:33 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Wow, these are great! I love them all.

I especially like the second Athena. That's your icon, yes?

It's very cool.

Oh, and the icon you made for the TW guy is quite nifty as well.

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Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:29 pm
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http://heartsmackingboombox.deviantart. ... e-67552975


^ My third favorite goddess. Yes, I know the arms are disproportionate and that she's green. The arm thing wasn't noticed until I was pretty much finished (I'll wait until I have a tablet to fix that). The greenness, on the other hand, was on purpose. I've always thought of Persephone as something of a flower: Greenish skin, pink/purple hair, bright blue eyes, etc.
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Wed Oct 17, 2007 11:10 pm
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Wow, she's very punk. Certainly not how I think of her. I always think of her as having long, golden hair and blue eyes but then, I suppose she does end up queen of the under world. I love the colour you've used for her hair and the dress is perfect. This time I think the expression is a touch strange but she's very beautiful and well drawn and you already know that the arms are diproportionate so I have no faults to point out. Great work!
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Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:22 am
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Yeah... she definately appears punkish in this. I wanted her in the all black attire that Hades gives her, but for the heck of it I added random skulls. The result wasn't too good :P

You're definately right about the expression. Its definately off, and certain aspects of it need to be redone. Thank you for pointing it out! I wouldn't have really noticed it if you hadn't.


Poseidon:
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Thu Oct 18, 2007 4:30 am
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Oh my, he's very interesting. His arms dont match his body very well. I like the crazy bulgin muscles, but his chest is too small I think. Actually, I could see the arms smaller and it still look really good. I love the greenish glow around him.

His face is brilliant. I really like it. He's so cool. Just how I imagined him. The sparkles will be cool. That's the only thing I thought he needed.
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Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:40 pm
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His face seems a little long to me and brings monkeys to mind but I love how you've done his skin and how it's almost like the waves at the ocean. Very clever. Also, I like his outfit but I think it bulges a little too much where his stomach is and the facial hair is brilliant. Maybe a little more work on the crown though? You could have it as marble or black slate or something. I think a rock would be uber cool. In general very good though =)
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