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Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:21 pm
Alteran says...



That's...uhh....very...errr....violent?

I like the somplicity of them all being like black stick figures but each is easyly discernable from the others.

It is already pretty smooth but you could add a few frames to help be even smoother. It might have just been my computer but it was a bit jumpy for me.
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Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:30 am
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I have some great respect. I used to be a pretty good animator (for a lack of a better word). Animating's tough stuff, man.

I like the first one. The animation's very simple and smooth. The second one is pretty weird. The movement is unreal and the characters are blocky and badly drawn.
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Fri Jun 15, 2007 5:50 am
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Adam- I think the problem could be image shack , that animation has 350 frames in it for a tiny bit . Hmmmm moogles eh? wheres mont blanc Kupo!

Blue monkey- The second one was made a few months after Pivot was first released so thats why its bad
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2007 4:35 pm
Emerson says...



The animations are very cool! Much cooler than anything I could do.
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Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:51 pm
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OmGeh A TrAiHlAH
in this it shows Krofts friend Tiddly Shanks (The name is explained in the movie) as of yet it dosent have the shouts and shiz put it so bear with me Hopefully u like it :p
http://img383.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... er1cl5.gif

Quite laggy on my comp but hopefully not so bad on your super computers
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2007 9:49 pm
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It works much better. It was my computer. Love the trailer. You most likely have to create an AVI when you go to make the sounds and stuff. Even a simple music file could make your trailer like wow.

And Montblanc is the very first one!
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Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:11 am
Rydia says...



Brilliant work!
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Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:33 am
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Adam_Atlantian wrote:It works much better. It was my computer. Love the trailer. You most likely have to create an AVI when you go to make the sounds and stuff. Even a simple music file could make your trailer like wow.

And Montblanc is the very first one!


Dang i thought i saw montblanc lol
Yeah ill upload the video onto flash and add in the music in a few hours ; p Ive got a list of songs im gonna try

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Sat Jun 16, 2007 8:34 pm
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the trailer is superb. I've attempted Pivot, and mad props on making something this fantastic.
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Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:50 am
Pivot_Master says...



thanks you just have to put in more frames than imaginable :p
  





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Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:14 am
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Hmmm im having real trouble putting in audio on everything if anyone knows of a way to do it with a .piv file can they either pm me or post it here
  





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Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:29 am
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Ohhh....I only know how to do it with AVI files.

What program are you useing?
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Fri Jun 22, 2007 11:49 am
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From the artwork I like the third one, the writing and the close up on the hand. Really good.
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Mon Jun 25, 2007 2:15 pm
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Adam_Atlantian wrote:Ohhh....I only know how to do it with AVI files.

What program are you useing?


Im using pivot and windows movie maker to put in the sound but the dam thing dosent do .Piv
  








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