Young Writers Society

Oh my goodness golly gee wiz, its been a while since I've done one of these.

Challenge #(blank)
Take an hour or more for each step (line art, coloring, etc.)
I needed to redo my self-portrait, and it was actually rather fun to do. The best part: I really am that orange/brown right now :p
It reminds me of the old nickelodeon show "Hey, Arnold"

Hehe, without the ponytail you'd look like me! Sort of, anyway. xD I really like the picture. The background is subtle, but it adds a lot, and I love the way the colors all fit together.

The coloring has some problems. Nothing huge, but there's a spot on her side where the blue goes over the black line, and by her shoulder, the black line goes too far. The sketchy lines in her eye and tank top straps and the ones near her chin make it look a little sloppy.

I like the expression in her eyes. ^_^

Ooo this one is my favorite of your so far! It's got an awesome colorscheme going on.

The only fault I'm overly concerned with is the shirt over the chest area. It's okay on the right side but the left side is completely different.

I think I understand what you mean by the shirt thing, but I'm probably wrong. I made all of the stripes the same width at first, but something didn't really fit right about it. So, instead, I made them a bit funky by changing them up a bit as a redrew them.

I totally agree about the sloppy lines thing. I'll fix it up sometime soon.

In the most insenstive way possible I could say it, it looks like she has one boob. That's what I mean lol.

Rather you than me pointing that out but I'm in complete agreeance. Other than that slight flaw though, she's well drawn and the colours are pretty.

Yeah.... I know. I tried to work with shading to create another boob, but it didn't really work. Until then, we'll pretend that my other one fell off in a freak accident involving radio active waste and spider man.

if you're gonna lose a boob, I spose that's the best way to do it.

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Anyway, I really like this one. It isn't quite your usual disney style, and the freshness is wonderful. Aside from sloppiness already pointde out, very well done.

[you seriously don't have a tablet? You aren't hiding one beneath the lumpy tumor-strewn stripes? -is suspicious- ]

Maybe if the blue stripes curved up instead of down?

whence wrote:if you're gonna lose a boob, I spose that's the best way to do it.

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Anyway, I really like this one. It isn't quite your usual disney style, and the freshness is wonderful. Aside from sloppiness already pointde out, very well done.

[you seriously don't have a tablet? You aren't hiding one beneath the lumpy tumor-strewn stripes? -is suspicious- ]

I'm too poor to afford a tablet and the many programs that are needed with it