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Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:58 am
Sohini says...



So what do you think of this? We don't get very colourful sunsets here and this one's one of the coolest till date:
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:16 am
stirly says...



Overall, I think its a beautiful and powerful peice. I especially like the way the light hits the palm tree closest to the viewer. Very coolio :p Its not an uber colorful sunset, though. Seems rather typical to me. Still, very uber cool peice, and definately deserving of a gold star (As soon as I have the technology to shove a sticker through my speakers and or harddrive, You'll be the first one I give one to)
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 6:47 am
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Ah! That's really cool. I love how everything is shilohetted almost, except for the sky. It really adds a lot to this. And the clouds are amazingly beautiful =D
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:59 am
Myth says...



I like the tree in the foreground, really darker than the background/sky though some of the building and trees could have been much darker too.
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:10 pm
Saphira says...



I love it! i like how the trees and the buildings are really dark and silhouetted against the sky. Very good! :D
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 1:04 pm
Rydia says...



It's very pretty but I agree that it's a rather dull sunset. The palm tree is certainly nice though. I wish we had scenery like that where I live.
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:48 pm
Via says...



It's pretty good. The only thing I would say is it's needs to be a LITTLE brighter....but not too much! =]
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Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:53 am
Sohini says...



That's a coconut tree, by the way!

Thanks. I'm hunting for more colourful sunsets though!
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Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:39 am
Areida says...



I agree with write me; slightly brighter, and this would be perfect!

I'm glad you managed to catch this sunset. :D
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:28 pm
Fand says...



Wow, the clouds in this one are gorgeous! It could be a little brighter, but that's the only real suggestion I can think of. I love the palm trees and the building in the distance.
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