Young Writers Society

Elion:

This would be...Ralian's world, Pros?

'Tis an interesting map. It reminds me somewhat of Europe's western coast.




IMP

I'm suprised that you remembered. Yep. It's Ralian's map. I have about thirty more that I'll post as soon as I get the chance.

Oy, how could I forget Ralian? He and Livny made too noticeable a scene in the Character Answer to easily slip any mind. ^_~

But then, I've also read the character profiles on SBS. ^_^ Will you post some Ralian's story ever, or for the moment, merely maps?

no, this is only for maps. I'm actually going to take a break from the Foreigner Redemption for months, and get Rach done.

Cool map!

I think I need to brush up on your chracters

Ranii:




Earian:

Islan and the east of Ranii look a little empty, as does the south of Elion. Dunno what you can do about it, though.

However, I would suggest moving the compass (or the legend) into the top left region--at the moment it looks very bottom-heavy.

Nice work!

I LOVE FANTASY MAPS. maybe you should try colouring them? Watercolour would be good. Or adding a bit more detail to make them more visually exciting. Cool maps though x

The third one doesn't look as good as the first two, and I'd agree with Imp: it looks like Europe.

Good maps but I agree that some colour would be nice and perhaps some sort of the symbol where the tows are. Just a little something that resembles buildings would do.

Poor Imp wrote:But then, I've also read the character profiles on SBS. ^_^ Will you post some Ralian's story ever, or for the moment, merely maps?

Prosithion wrote:no, this is only for maps. I'm actually going to take a break from the Foreigner Redemption for months, and get Rach done.

... you could draw up a roadmap of 1950s Vienna, you know?

LOL! Yes, more colors would be nice. But I must say, you are very very dedicated to your story.

Are there no deserts?

The first does, indeed, have a shape reminiscent of the Iberian peninsula! ^_^ It's the best of the lot, I think; the other two are a little... sketchy.