I'm still working on improving and was looking for some criticism. If anyone knows what Creepypasta is, you won't recognize these two(I did a terrible job)
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. — Neil Gaiman
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