Young Writers Society

I hope you like it guys and gals, because I really tried.
It is a drawing fom my head, with no copying involved from anywhere.
I will post some more when I begin to do the rest!

Like I said eariler, I hope you like it!

it looks red... and it is shinny. Try to retake the picture (Or re-scan it). Other than that I thought it was nicely drawn and seems lustful ^_^

I took this from my phone, and it's purposely red bcause I put it in front of my red curtains to reflect the colour on it.

The detailing is rather nice, but it's the proportions that you haven't gotten down yet. You've got the basics for the female shape, but the legs look a little too manly, and the shoulders are too round and bulgy. I really like how you had done the hair, and the shading is done really well, expect maybe a little too dark in the legs.

It could really be improved if you learned the right proportions of the body. If you drew inside of boxes that were all the same size, the head would take up the first, the torso the next three, thighs a box and a half, calves a box and a half, and feet depending on the angle take up the last box. Your upper arm ends at the middle of the trose, your fingers coming down to mid-thigh. Those are your basics.

--meow

Cheers for the advice mayyyn!
>.<

This is good.

I like how you purposely photographed it in front of curtains to make it red; creative much!!

Okies. So, You need to figure out 2 things.
1. MOST IMPORTANT THING IN REALISM DRAWING where is the light coming from? Because you cant begin shading unless you know where the light falls, because where else do you shade?
2. Proportions. She's too thin, and her elbows are tiny. But the legs are perfect! they aren't manly AT ALL. And you also remembered collarbones. YEY!! I am geniunly happy about that. Collarbones are such fun to draw.

Thats basically it. If I were you I'd log on to deviantart and print off some stock images and copy them. Its the best way to learn to draw people. Photos dont move, unlike actual personas.
xxx

I wasn't a fan for the face but the body is drawn good.

the body is wicked,

but the face is a bit square at the top and the face is a bit of putting.

To improve try drawing a new shape for the head.

love

rebbeccca

There's something largish about the head, but I thought the legs were really nice. The dress tapers off kind of strangely, but the rest of the body--excluding the head--was well drawn. Watch for proportion. Everything needs to be in reference to everything else.